Carla, You have a good reading voice that you use well to add to the listener's understanding of what you wrote. You changed your pace, you emphasized some parts while softening others. Your reading really added to the meaning of the writing. Your essay had a clear point for which you gave specific evidence. You used transitions well. You have a clear teaching tone to your writing! Mrs. J
Carla, You have a good reading voice that you use well to add to the listener's understanding of what you wrote. You changed your pace, you emphasized some parts while softening others. Your reading really added to the meaning of the writing. Your essay had a clear point for which you gave specific evidence. You used transitions well. You have a clear teaching tone to your writing!
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I like how you read your literary essay loudly and clearly.
ReplyDeleteI like how you speak clearly I also like how you explain what happens in the story in the bigging
ReplyDeleteI think maybe you could put more reasons and more evidence
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a lot of detail.
ReplyDeleteI like how you are very confident.
I wish you had a little more detail.